After looking though my first draft, I noticed that I had not mentioned my academic qualifications. I also adapted some of the sentences, so that it doesn't sound repetitive and removed some sections that were not relevant.
Hi, just wanted to say hello .... i enjoyed reading your profile. I can see your love of dance. How are you finding the course so far? Take care Michelle :)
Hello Michelle, I'm enjoying the course. I think its a little tricky as I was unable to attend the induction day, so I feel a little in the dark, but I'm trying my best! How are you finding the course?
Hi, just wanted to say hello .... i enjoyed reading your profile. I can see your love of dance. How are you finding the course so far?
ReplyDeleteTake care
Michelle :)
Hello Michelle, I'm enjoying the course. I think its a little tricky as I was unable to attend the induction day, so I feel a little in the dark, but I'm trying my best!
ReplyDeleteHow are you finding the course?